this is my evolution of guitar and i havnt finished it me and my freind ollie are making it.
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, September 11, 2020
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Hi Lachie, My name is Yousuf from Waikowhai Primary School. I really liked how you talked about how you made a guitar with your friend. Maybe next time you could add some more writing about the tips you needed to make the guitar. This made me think when I had to make a rubbish bin from paper. If you want to check my blog at http://wpsyousufs.blogspot.com/2018/01/welcome.html#comment-form
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